继续上学期的雅思大作文

能够对当前社会状态做出一个评价

举个例子，生活在大家庭里面的优点和缺点

老师的例子和范文：
family life in the modern world is not the same experience as in the past, because families are smaller in the present, there were advantages and disadvantages for living in a big family in the past.
现代世界的家庭生活与过去不同，因为现在的家庭规模较小，过去生活在一个大家庭中有其利弊。
这是机翻，参考一下就行啦

这个开头段就是介绍了这篇文章的大致内容，没有提出自己的观点。

i believe there were three main benefits. Firstly, children always had other children to play with in the same house, so they learned social skills. They also/And （And不能放在句首）they quarreled. But/However（But不能放在句首）, when they quarreled, they learned to defend themselves. Secondly, children helped in the house and/so（这里And放在句子中间，表连接；一般also我们是不会放在句子中间的） as a consequence they became more responsible. Also/However（however表示转折）, different generations lived together, so grandparents looked after young children and/also younger brothers learned many things fr om their elder brothers.
我相信有三个主要好处。 首先，孩子们总是在同一个房子里有其他孩子一起玩，因此他们学习了社交技巧。 他们也/他们吵架了。 但是/但是，当他们吵架时，他们学会了为自己辩护。 第二，孩子们在房子里帮忙，因此他们变得更加负责。 同样/但是，不同的世代生活在一起，所以祖父母照顾年幼的孩子和/或弟弟从哥哥那里学到了很多东西。
任然是机翻，万能の机器翻译
哦对了，在上文中可以选择的那些是连词，加粗的是正确的

i think many of the disadvantages were financial. Firstly, one of the parents could not work, because he or she had to stay at home to look after the children and the grandparents. This meant the family earned less As a result, parents had less money to pay for their children's education and other activities. But/However,（but不能放在句首） in my view, the biggest problem was that parents could not pay so much attention to individual children. As a result, children with problems sometimes suffered.
我认为许多缺点是财务上的。 首先，其中一位父母无法工作，因为他或她不得不待在家里照顾孩子和祖父母。 这意味着家庭收入减少。结果，父母用于子女教育和其他活动的钱减少了。 但是/在我看来，最大的问题是父母不能过多地照顾个别孩子。 结果，有问题的孩子有时会遭受痛苦。
照样是机翻

in summary, being a member in a big family has both advantages and disadvantages. Family members each a stronger relationship and they helped each other when they had problems. Also/And people were always surrounded by their relatives, so they were never lonely. But/However, parents might have not enough money to support everyone in the family and give enough attention to the children.
总而言之，成为一个大家庭的成员既有优点也有缺点。 家庭成员之间的关系更加牢固，遇到困难时他们会互相帮助。 而且/人们总是被亲戚包围着，所以他们从不孤单。 但是/但是，父母可能没有足够的钱来养家糊口，也没有足够的精力照顾孩子。
恩，机翻

一般来讲我们写4段，
1.背景信息，比如：接下来我来分析balabalabala
2.主体段：2-3个优点
3.主体段：2-3个缺点
4.给出客观的评价，或者也可以给前面的优缺点做出一个总结，既有好的地方也有不好的地方。顺带一提，不要用前面一样的句型，单词最好也用同义替换给换一下

作业：1.先读一下范文，注意加粗的单词
in many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Dose this trend have positive or negative effects on society?
在很多国家，老年人的比例正在逐步上升，这个趋势对社会有正面或负面的影响吗？

there are two reasons why they have chosen to start a new life in cities. firstly, cities are more densely populated and there are more job opportunities available, so people may earn more money. this means that they can improve living standards and afford more consumer goods that ever before. by contrast, it is not easy to find work in rural communities, where industries are underdeveloped and consumer spending is limited. another reason is that city dwellers have easy access to public services, including education couples intedn to send their children to good schools in urban areas, so as to break the cycle of poverty.
他们选择在城市开始新生活的原因有两个。首先，城市人口稠密，有更多的工作机会，人们可能会赚更多的钱。这意味着他们可以改善生活水平并负担更多的消费品。相比之下，在工业不发达且消费者支出有限的农村社区找工作并不容易。另一个原因是城市居民可以方便地获得公共服务，包括愿意将子女送往城市地区好的学校的教育夫妇，以打破贫困的循环。

the increased number of urban dwellers can put huge pressure on housing and facities in cities. some cities are unable to accmmodate a large population because of the shortage of land. many migrant workers are foced to live din slums and edure harsh living conditions, as they cannot afford housing. people are prone to poor health because urban facilliries fail to meet the frowing demand for clean woater, dispose of household waste effectirvely and manage sewage
dwellers
越来越多的城市居民会给城市的住房和设施带来巨大压力。一些城市由于土地短缺而无法容纳大量人口。由于无法负担住房费用，许多移民工人被迫居住在贫民窟并享有恶劣的生活条件。由于城市设施无法满足人们对清洁用水的日益增长的需求，无法有效地处理生活垃圾和管理污水，因此人们容易健康不良

another problem associated with a rural-to-urban shift is that rural-urban income disparities will grow, instead of diminishing. young people who are amitious energetic, hardworking and creative prefer to go to the cities in search of educational and employment opportunities. the shortage of labor has become a problem in rural communities and it is not easy to revitalize the local economy.
与城乡转移有关的另一个问题是，城乡收入差距将扩大而不是减少。那些精力充沛，努力工作和富有创造力的年轻人更喜欢去城市寻找教育和就业机会。劳动力短缺已成为农村社区的问题，振兴地方经济并不容易。

例题2:
some people think buildings such as flats(平坦的) and houses should be designed to last a long tim. other believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
有些人认为诸如公寓和房屋之类的建筑物应设计成能维持较长的时间。 其他人则认为，迅速而廉价地提供住宿更为重要。 讨论这两种观点并发表自己的看法。

（一个段落A一个段落B）

Most governments have to build housing for their citizens（城市居民）. as populations grow, more homes and needed and sometimes the demand for accommodation（住所） increases rapidly（急速的）. if people cannot find places to live, it is a huge worry for them. thry do not care about the quality of their housing. they just need somewhere to live.
大多数政府必须为其公民建造住房。 随着人口的增长，更多的住房和需求，有时对住宿的需求迅速增加。 如果人们找不到居住的地方，这对他们来说是一个巨大的担忧。 并不在乎他们房屋的质量。 他们只需要一个住所。

in the past, many buildings were carefully designed, and prople thouthe that external appearance （外表）was important, in many countires, some of the most beautiful house are old ones, because they have an interesting shape and the architecture（建筑风格） is imressive（令人印象深刻的）. even though they were constructed （建筑）a long time ago, they are still used and they can still cost a lost of money to buy. for this reason, some people believe that homes today should also be well built with good materials.
过去，许多建筑物都是经过精心设计的，并认为外观很重要。在许多国家，一些最美丽的房子是老式的，因为它们的形状有趣，建筑风格迷人。 即使它们是很久以前建造的，它们仍在使用，并且仍然可能会花很多钱购买。 因此，有些人认为，今天的房屋也应该用优质的材料建造。
使用几句话剖析了A种人的想法，举了很多国家建筑的栗子，因为老房子往往外形很令人印象深刻之类的，最后一句话总结，就因为这个原因，现在很多人认为balabalabala

Although i agree with this, i also feel that poor might not think it is fair（公平）. some types of building material are much more expensive than others. Architects（建筑师） are also expensive since they charge（收取） a lot of money for design. there are many apartment blocks in the poor areas, and many apartment blocks（公寓区） in the poor areas. and many people want to live in them. they do not think about how much they cost to build. unfortunately, these burildings may not last very long, and the occupants（居民） may have all sports of （各种各样的）problems with the building, which may that more homes have to be built.
尽管我同意这一点，但我也觉得穷人可能认为这不公平。 某些类型的建筑材料比其他类型的昂贵得多。 建筑师也很昂贵，因为他们花了很多钱进行设计。 贫困地区有很多公寓楼，贫困地区有很多公寓楼。 许多人想要生活在其中。 他们不考虑建造成本。 不幸的是，这些建筑物可能不会持续很长时间，并且居住者可能对建筑物有种种麻烦，可能需要建造更多房屋。
这段是将画风转到另外一个主题去了，说房子还是非常贵的，一个好的房子要价也不低，对于穷人来说他们需要的是住的地方而不是多好多美的地方

in conclusion, i think both views are reasonable（合理的）. wild city accommodation must be well built so that it does not start to fall down（倒塌） too soon, it should also be affordable（承担的起的） and available（可用的） for people who need it
总之，我认为这两种观点都是合理的。 野生城市的住宿必须精心建造，以免落得太早，它应该是负担得起的，并可供有需要的人使用

开头段：介绍社会现象
主体段1：分析第一个观点
主体段2：分析第二个观点
总结段：对这个社会现象做出客观评价

citizen
accommodation
rapidly
external
appearance
architecture
architect
impressive
construct
fair
charge
apartment
block
unfortunately
occupant
all sorts of
reasonable
average
life expectancy
agin/ageing

in the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society
人类的评价寿命正在增加
对个人和社会有什么影响？提出一些解决方案来减少老年化人口对社会的影响

一些常见的语法错误:
拼写
主谓一致
词性误用
词不达意
没有使用高级词汇
动词时态或语态误用（现在过去将来，主动语态被动语态）

连词不要放在句首
不要使用第一和第三人称
老师在上课的时候的范文：
In many countries, the proportion of elderly population is increasing.Faced with the problem of aging population, people started fierce discussions. Of course, everything is like a coin. It has both positive and negative sides.
在许多国家，老年人口所占的比例正在增加。面对人口老龄化问题，人们开始进行激烈的讨论。 当然，一切都像一枚硬币。 它既有积极的一面，也有消极的一面。

There are two points on the positive side. On the one hand, the aging population lets the excellent traditional culture be carried foeward China attaches great importance to the concept of filial piety. The fact that the exist of many elderly people indicates that almost every family has elderly people, so each young [erson has a platform to inherit and develop traditional culture. On the other hand, it is the power that inspires young prople. The increasing age of the population means that the number of people who are working is decreasing and the number of prople who are needing supports is increasing. When there is pressure, there will be motivation. Young prople must work hard in order to take care of the elders and raise their children, and this potential abaility is naturally stmulated.
正面有两点。 一方面，人口的老龄化让优秀的传统文化得以弘扬。中国十分重视孝道。 许多老人的存在表明，几乎每个家庭都有老人，因此每个年轻人都有继承和发展传统文化的平台。 另一方面，是激发年轻人的力量。 人口年龄的增长意味着正在工作的人数正在减少，而需要支持的支柱的人数正在增加。 有压力时，就会有动力。 年轻人必须努力工作，以照顾长者并抚养孩子，这种潜在的天生自然是不容忍的。

There are also two disadvantages. One thing is that young people are living under too much pressure. Due to the pressure of supporting parents is not sharde by siblings it can cause a lot of worries on the younger generation. The second point is that the average working efficiency of society will decvrease. Elder people are unable to work, and the growth of the aging population will affect the aconomy of the sociery.
还有两个缺点。 一件事是年轻人生活在太多压力之下。 由于抚养父母的压力没有得到兄弟姐妹的支持，这可能会给年轻一代带来很多麻烦。 第二点是社会的平均工作效率将下降。 老年人无法工作，人口老龄化的增长将影响社会经济。

In conclusion, everyone has different opinions of the problem of aging population. The positive and negative aspects are relative, and we should consider the problem optimistically.
总之，对于人口老龄化问题，每个人都有不同的看法。 积极和消极方面是相对的，我们应该乐观地考虑这个问题。

雅思小作文

for writing task 1, you are required to write a summary of information from graphs, tables, charts or diagrams in 20 minutes with a minimum of 150 words. Task 1 is worth one third of your writing score. Task 2 is worth two thirds.
总结：20分钟150字以上

The graph below shows the quantities(质量) of goods（物品） transported in the UK between 1974 and 2020 by four different modes（模式，模型） of transport.
summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features（特点）, and make comparisons where relevant.
下图显示了四种不同的运输方式在1974年至2020年之间英国的货物运输量
通过选择和报告主要功能来汇总信息，并在相关时进行比较。

下面我们来看一个例题：

我们先自问一下10个问题

What kind of chart is it?
这种图标是什么类型的
A: Line Chart

What does the title say about the chart? (Read it carefully)
图标的标题是啥
A:The qualitites of goods fransported in the UK between 1974 and 2020 by four different modes of transport

What information is contained on each line?
每条线表达的意思是啥
A:Four different modes of transport: Road, water, rail, piepeline

What are the units of measurements?(Age, %, amount etc.)
度量单位是啥
A:amount

What groups are compared?
我们需要对比那些组？
A:four different way to trans

What is the time period?(Past, preset or furure)
什么时间段？（过去，预设或未来）
A:Past

What is the most obvious thing that the data whows you?( General increase or decrease?)
这组数据对于你来说最明显的是什么？（一般是往上还是往下？）
A:The general increasing use of each mode of transport.

What is the most important of significant poece of information displayed?
这组数据中最重要的信息是啥
A:Road is the most commin way for goods transporation

Can any comparisons be made?(Between groups or charts if more than one)
可否进行任意的比较？（就是在多个图表之间）
A:sure

Is it a static（静态的） chart or dynamic（动态的） chart?(static-one time period. Dynamic-over a period of time)
这是个静态的图还是动态的图？
A:dynamic chart

范文:
The graph compares the volumes of goods delivered by four means of transport in the UK during the period 1974 to 2020.

Overall, almost every means of transport in UK saw an upward trend in the goods delivery, while there was a different pattern in rail. Road transportation delivered more goods than any other means of transport.

该图比较了1974年至2020年期间英国四种运输方式交付的货物数量。

公路运输的货物数量最大，1974年约为7000万吨。2002年，这一数字猛增至约1亿吨。在此期间，水的数量较低。它从1974年的约4000万吨增加到约5800万吨。在1980年达到这个水平，直到1998年才达到这个水平，在2002年攀升至6500万吨以上。

其他两种运输方式的货物运输量较低。铁路蒸腾量从1974年的约4000万吨减少到1984年的3000万吨，尽管到2002年增加到超过4000万吨，但数量却急剧下降。运输管道从约500万吨稳步增长从1974年的1000吨增加到1995年的2000万吨，然后在此期间的其余时间保持在这个水平。阻碍增长，这是最不流行的交通工具。

总体而言，英国几乎每种运输工具的货物交付量都呈上升趋势，而铁路则有不同的模式。公路运输交付的货物比任何其他运输手段都要多。

The graph compares the volumes 容量 of good delivered运输 by for means方式 of transport in the UK during the period时期 1974 to 2020.
该图比较了1974年至2020年期间英国的运输方式交付的货物数量

The amount of goods transported by road was the largest, with around 70 million tonns in 1974. Hit sharply increased to about 100 million tonnes in 2002. The figure for water was lower throughout the period. it rose fr-om around 40 million tonnes in 1974 to about 58 million tonnes.in 1980 and then stood at this level until 1998, before climbing to over 65 million tonnes in 2002.
公路运输的货物数量最大，1974年约为7,000万吨。2002年，这一数字猛增至约1亿吨。在此期间，水的数量较低。 它从1974年的约4000万吨增加到约5800万吨。 在1980年达到这个水平，直到1998年才达到这个水平，在2002年攀升至6500万吨以上。

The amounts of goods transported b the other two means of transport were lower. there was a dramatic fall in the figure for rail transpiration fr-om around 40 million tonnes in 1974 to 30 million tonnes in 1984, although it increased to over 40 million tonnes in 2002. The pipeline for transporting goods saw a steady growth fr-om pipeline approximately 5 million tonnes in 1974 to over 20 million tonnes in 1995, and then it remained at this level in the rest of the period. Dispirit the growth, it was the least popular means of transport.
其他两种运输方式的货物运输量较低。 铁路蒸腾量从1974年的约4000万吨减少到1984年的3000万吨，尽管到2002年增加到超过4000万吨，但数量却急剧下降。运输管道从约500万吨稳步增长 从1974年的1000吨增加到1995年的2000万吨，然后在此期间的其余时间保持在这个水平。 阻碍增长，这是最不流行的交通工具。

Overall, almost every means of transport in UK saw an upward trend in the goods delivery, while there was a different pattern in rail. Road transportation delivered more goods than any other means of transport.
总体而言，英国的几乎所有运输方式的货物交付量都呈上升趋势，而铁路则有不同的模式。 公路运输交付的货物比任何其他运输手段都要多。

开头：大致介绍图标标题和内容
主体段1：介绍主要的特点
主体段2：介绍次要的特点
总结段：总结各个主要特点

engineering attracted the highest proportion of male students , while the percentage of females who studied this subject was the lowest . math and science were chosen bu 13% of men, higer than the figure for womaen similarly, com[utin ttracted 10% of men, compared with 4$ of women
工程学吸引的男生比例最高，而学习该科目的女性比例最低。 数学和科学被选为男性的13％，比womaen的数字高，同样，男性占10％，女性为4％

other subject showed different patterns. there was a big difference in health (15% females and only 4% of men). while nearly 19% and 10% of female students studied arts and humanities and education, only 13% and 8% of male students chose those subjects. By comparison, the proportion of boys who studied accounting economics was similar to the figure for girls ( 13% and 11% respectively).
其他主题表现出不同的模式。 在健康方面存在很大差异（女性为15％，男性仅为4％）。 而将近19％和10％的女学生学习艺术，人文和教育，而只有13％和8％的男学生选择了这些科目。 相比之下，学习会计经济学的男孩比例与女孩的比例相似（分别为13％和11％）。

overall, engineering was the top choice for man, wheras arts and humanities were the most populat option for women. women were more likely than men to study education, health and business studies and a different pattern was seen in other subject.
总的来说，工程是男人的头等选择，啤酒艺术和人文科学是妇女的最多选择。 女性比男性更有可能学习教育，卫生和商业研究，而其他学科则呈现出不同的模式。

饼状图文章结构：

范文：
these two pie charts compare the factors that students considered when choosing a university n the UK in 1982 and 2002.
这两个饼图比较了学生在1982年和2002年选择英国大学时考虑的因素。

suitable conures and degrees were the most populat consideration, although theproportion of students who chose this reason dropped fr om 40% to 34%. The precentage of students who considered cost was the second highest, but there was a sharp decrease to 5% The figure for those considering the distance to parental home declined fr om 19% to 16%.
尽管选择该原因的学生比例从40％下降到34％，但最合适的学位和学位是最普遍的考虑因素。 考虑费用的学生比例是第二高的，但急剧下降到5％。考虑到父母住所距离的那些人的比例从19％下降到16％。

The proportion of students who paid attention to the reputatiln of the universty was as low as 5%, but this factor saw a significant rise to 25%, There was a remarkable change in the precentage of prople who calued amenities, social activites and sports facilities, rising fr om 5% to 18%. The figure for admission criteria remained basically unchanged(3% in 1982 and 2% in 2002)
注重大学声誉的学生比例低至5％，但这一比例显着上升至25％。对便利设施，社交活动和体育设施进行了计算的prople的比例发生了显着变化，从5％上升到18％。录取标准的数字基本保持不变（1982年为3％，2002年为2％）

Overall, more sudents considered suitable courses and degrees than those who focused on any others factors. The precentages of students who considered fame of the university or amenities and sorts facilities in creased, while the figures for other fators showed oppsing trends.
总体而言，与那些专注于其他因素的学生相比，认为合适的课程和学位的学生更多。考虑大学名气或便利设施并对其设施进行分类的学生比例有所上升，而其他组织的数字则呈现出惊人的趋势。